Universities should require students to take classes in many subjects
: Universities should require students to take classes in many subjects for three reasons.
1.The mine(?) purpose of universities is TO GIVE a opportunity to accumulate knowledge of all students. Students try to learn more by taking classes. However, some students want to take classes only what they want. This will not help to collect their knowledge in many ways(WHAT WAYS?). Therefore, universities should require students to take classes in many subjects.
2. students will be given more options to choose their futures(YOU MEAN MAJOR?). If students take many different subjects, they will realize what they really want to do in the future. While they are learning, they will find which is good or which is not good for themselves.
3.It will give them wide sence(?) by taking many subjects. People do not know what is going to happen in the future. If students learn as much as they can, they will know MUCH information and they can apply to their real lives when they need.
You points out three points well. Also, organization and structure of the essay is good.
