Jiwon

desiapig:

What do you think the characterisitics of a good class? First of all, I think a good class participates in class well. Students must participates in class to show willing to learn. Although, a good class behaves and follows rules in class such as does all the homework on time and prepare for the tests. Other important characteristics of a good class is respect classmates and teachers in class. Students and teachers had better respect each other and each other’s opinions to be have a good class.

 Good thing is that you point out the detail and the reason of your each point you are making. One of mistakes you made is that you have to write complete sentence after “although.”